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Taci
Taci
Atingerea ta
E una divină,
De viaţă mă umplu
Ţinînd a ta mînă
Pământul îmi fuge
De sub picioare,
Prin haine aripi
Încet se strecoară.
Brusc, explodez!
La viteza luminii
Mă îndepărtez,
Sorbind veşnicia.
În cîteva clipe
Cuprind universul,
Şi iarăşi cu tine
Mă văd ţinînd mersul.
Am revenit,
Încălzind a ta mînă,
Am înţeles
Că sunt cu o zînă…
2 comments
Comment from: lucia [Visitor]
t-am zis eu ca esti talentat, ti-am zis?:)felicitari pentru noul tau inceput in scrierea de poezii... iar fenomenul acesta, indiscutabil, atesta starea ta de spirit legata de perioada speciala din viata ta..sau..ma inshel?.. ;)
2007-Jan-10, Wed @ 22:43
Comment from: Virusok [Visitor]
seems like it's about somebody very special around here.
Or maybe you are just fantasizing ?
I find that possible as well.
No matter what, the point is the poem is awesome, and the other thing is that you make me feel wanting writing my own art.
There is an issue.. it's about the limitations of my imagination.. a thing that discourages me.. but I am working on it.
good job!
Or maybe you are just fantasizing ?
I find that possible as well.
No matter what, the point is the poem is awesome, and the other thing is that you make me feel wanting writing my own art.
There is an issue.. it's about the limitations of my imagination.. a thing that discourages me.. but I am working on it.
good job!
2007-Jul-10, Tue @ 09:25